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hi luc@s
I am sitting for PET on the fifth of May
I need some help to improve my writing skill, might you give me a hand?
I think I should write short texts about general topics, could you revise them?

Glad to be of help mate

Do you think I should create a new thread?
Anyway what topic are you interested in? So I shall begin to write about it. Light Topic! Holiday, fashion, tv series... stuff like these.

Go ahead.
Just keep in mind that It may take me sometime to reply, working and all

Hi mate
I had my first English lesson last Tuesday, so I worked with my teacher
Now I'll write a story (it's an exercise from the book "Preliminary for school trainer" By Cambridge University press)
I must use about 100 words

Write a story beginning

When Tom's dad picked him up in the car, he handed Tom a big bag from a sports store, and smiled.

Tom was surprised and quickly opened the bag: there were a skatebord and baggy clothes, those skaters usually wear.
Tom had always dreamed to go skating and now his father was driving toward the skate park. At the skate park there was Juliet, a young women, waiting for them. She was a skate trainer, and Tom had his first lesson. The day was sunny and warm, a perfect day to stay outdoor, Tom's father watched his son enjoying himself and thought how much they are happy and carefree. Everything's ok. In the evening during the dinner Tom told his mother about his wonderful afternoon.

I know this is a fool story, could you revise it? I didn't use dictionary, and it took me five minutes.

Emh, I don't like topics suggested in my book, may you give me different hints?

Tom was startled and quickly opened the bag: there were a skatebord, and some baggy clothes, the kind skaters usually wear.
Tom had always dreamed of going to skate and now his father was driving them towards the skate park.
Once there, here was Juliet, a young women, waiting. She was a skate trainer, and Tom had his first lesson. The day was sunny and warm, a perfect day to stay outdoor, Tom's father loved watching his son having a good time and marveled about how much happy and carefree they were.
Everything's fine.
In the evening, while having dinner, Tom described his wonderful afternoon to his mother.

I'd say it like this

Luc@s ha scritto:Hi lads,
having lived for a long time in english speaking places, I came to love the Irish "dialect" but, purely sound related, I love the brit accent/dialect (like got's Emilia Clarke).

What's your take on this matter?


Cherrs

I love british accent too! and british boys as well

hi everyone
I finally did my English exam
but I have to wait a month for the result
I hope I did well

dear Lucas do not give up checking my texts please
I bet I made lots mistakes in so few lines

gio73 ha scritto:hi everyone
I finally did my English exam
but I have to wait a month for the result
I hope I did well

dear Lucas do not give up checking my texts please
I bet I made lots mistakes in so few lines

I finally completed my English exam, sadly I have an entire month to wait ahead of me, fingers crossed!
I really hope I did some good.

I have got the pet!

I passed my exam thank you so much Luc@s.
Next year the first, I count on your help.